Jelly Doughnuts

God I wish I had one right now...

Well, since no one is online, I guess I'll have to mass spam this post to get some feedback.

Lately I've realized that I'm pretty terrible at stories with an ongoing plot, so I want to focas on groups of short stories revolving around the same group of characters. I can write short stories much better and it gives me a chance to draw pretty much whatever I want. I'd post two or three pages with Tabbi introducing all the characters and their relations, then go into the first story... which would probably be something silly, like, Tabbi having a bad day and going off on a shopping rampage with Darbz...

I have plenty of ideas and I think this would be fun, but I'd really love some feedback other than "I like /don't like this." or the "O:" face. ^^

THE END.

We've got a good thing going

Good idea I'm sticking with:
Gloves is either the head of or high up in a mafia-type organization that keeps tabs on infected people, especially those who do vigilante work or other illegal things. When Tabbi comes up on Sissy in the park she's trying to get someone to pay up or something.
I decided that that someone is Aimee, but you don't actually meet her for a while.

Silly Idea:
Tabbi being a "magical girl" in 6th grade. She tried being a superhero, fighting for justice at an afterschool program she was enrolled in in a Halloween costume.

I may actually use this. Because you know she's try it.

Also, Darby's powers: WTF should they be? D:

Oh Snap

So, I think I decided on some background information.

Lets see how long it lasts until I change it! : D

So, instead of Tabbi and Tadhg living in NYC before the attacks and moving, I think that only their grandmother lives there. Tabbi has always lived in the same house in Wes Chester county and, well, as for Tadhg, I'm not sure. A while ago I had the idea that he grew up in Boston but his family moved back to the New York area after a fire, moving into their apartment in Titusville right before the attacks. It would account for why Tabbi is so excited to show him around the city if he had just recently moved there and hadn't visited the area very often... but then I still like the idea of him just growing up in the New York area with Tabbi as well.

Crow lived on Long Island and was on a subway with his dad when the bombs went off. By pure luck (and possibly an early manifestation of his power's secondary ability to manipulate metal) he was one of the only, and by far the youngest, person on the entire train to survive. He was in a coma for 2 days, but otherwise relativly unscaved, and became a national human interst story. National news recoginition, talk shows, all that great stuff. Part of the reason he uses the name Crow is because everyone knows about David-Anthoney Politucci... sometimes he still gets recognised. He hates it and it only fuels his survivor's remorse.

OH CRAP

A post.

Lately I feel like I'm very dumb. Very VERY dumb. I keep coming up with weird stuff for Anarchy that no one else will really care about at the moment and, even though they'd fit and help clear up somethings in the future, have no way of fitting into the story unless someone flat out said it.

I mean I /could/ make someone just state it, but I can't forsee a nice spot to do it. :/

Basically, I was thinking about how the traumatic events occur and how something thats traumatic for one person might not be as bad for another. I'm thinking that, among all the other weird scientific stats I've come up with, they've found that some people are just more apt to the infection to others.
It obviously runs in the O'Malley family, as three out of the four kids who were present during the attack gained powers, one from just witnessing the events. Tabbi and Tadhg's abilties manifested as the situation occured, before either of them were seriesou injured, saving their lives, then going dorment until they were nine or ten... but the you have Crow who was almost crushed to death and whose father died in front of him not ending up with abilities until years later.
I guess what I'm saying is that in some people, the mutation is pretty much looking for an excuse come through, while in others it could take years.

Maybe that changes with age, but I don't know xD

St. Ursula's cheerleaders

Morgan Kendrick, Super Senior and Captain. Queen bitch, takes nothing but perfection and scares/motivates everyone.

Gwen Grund, Super Senior. Physically strong but a complete doormat. A little strange, wants to be Morgan's bff more than anything in the world.

Micheal, Junior. Bitchy and chubby, very gay. Is also big in the drama club.

Brooke Bishop, Junior. African American but probably the whitest person on the squad. Preppy, popped collar, lives on cell, ect. Tad chubby. May like to gossip but I'm not sure.

Sonia Heidrich, Junior. IRL Mary Sue. Peppy, good at everything, nice to the point of it being annoying.

Alexa-Andrea, Sophmore. Bubbley but very concerned with her reputation. Is working hard on her sweet 16 plans for MTV.

Tabbi O'Malley, Sophmore.

Jin-Sook Goldstein, Sophmore. Korean adopted by white Jewish parents. Thinks she has a huge rebelious steak but is really a "good girl" Can be mean and blunt but mostly likes joking around.

Sissy Andre, Freshman. Pulled a head a year. bitch but doesn't weigh very much.

Darby (Harumi) Takahashi, 7th grader. Mascot. Spazzy but loves everything about cheerleading. Quite a few of the other cheerleaders are uncomforitable around her.

I still need two more cheerleaders and the people whose names are in italics need last names.

BAM.

Blah~

I'm thinking about just writing everything at this point. Making a script of sorts that I can fool around with when need be before I start redrawing a begining again.

Also seriously thinking about moving away from the anime style more. If the style was a bit more of a fusion then I could pull off sillysite gags like having everything appear SHINEYDESUSHOJO whenever Tabbi is describing something mundane and have everything appear GRIMDARKAMERICANCOMICBOOK when Tadhg describes something.

I've also been doing some more inepth thinking reguarding the senario of the game itself. I have definate ideas for it and I'd like some of them to play a larger part in the story.

I think background information through too much. I really need to stop. >>;

So you know how Tadhg's a little bitch most of the time?
I was thinking that a lot of that is because he's trying to repress his virus features most of the time, which is unpleasent, thus making him pissy. When he's in that level between being normal and having the virus completely controling him his personality seems to change. He's not as angry (as being the keyword) and seems to be friendlier. Only thing is he's usually trying to hide himself because he hates looking like that.

I'm ever so elequent right now. >>

Thoughts?